The velvet curtains of the Midnight Garden theater hung heavy with secrets and smoke. Dr. Cassandra Veil took the stage in her signature crimson coat, her dark hair swept into an elegant twist. The audience leaned forward in anticipation.
"Ladies and gentlemen," her voice carried through the intimate space, "tonight I seek a volunteer brave enough to explore the depths of their own mind."
Marcus had watched her show three times that week. Each performance left him more captivated than the last. When her eyes swept across the crowd and landed on him, his hand shot up before conscious thought could intervene.
"You, sir. Please join me."
The stage lights were warmer than he expected. Up close, Dr. Veil's presence was magnetic—her amber eyes seemed to see through him.
"What's your name?" she asked, circling him slowly.
"Marcus."
"Marcus." She repeated it like a incantation. "Tell me, do you believe in the power of the mind?"
"I... I'm not sure."
"Then let me show you." She produced a silver pocket watch, letting it dangle between them. "Focus on the pendulum. Notice how it catches the light. How it sways with perfect rhythm."
Marcus watched the watch swing back and forth. Her voice continued, low and melodic, describing the weight of his eyelids, the relaxation flowing through his limbs. The audience faded away. There was only her voice, the pendulum, and a growing warmth spreading through his chest.
"When I snap my fingers, you'll open your eyes, but you'll remain in this peaceful state. You'll find that you want to please me, to follow my suggestions. It will feel natural and right. Do you understand?"
"Yes," he heard himself say.
The snap was sharp. His eyes opened, but the world had a dreamlike quality. Dr. Veil smiled at him, and he felt that warmth intensify.
"Marcus, I want you to imagine a golden thread connecting us. Can you feel it?"
He could. It ran from his solar plexus to hers, thrumming with energy.
"Good. Now, when I tug on this thread—" she made a pulling motion with her hand, "—you'll feel compelled to step closer to me."
The invisible tug came, and his feet moved of their own accord. The audience gasped and applauded.
For the next twenty minutes, she guided him through increasingly elaborate demonstrations. He danced when she hummed, froze like a statue at her command, even forgot his own name temporarily when she told him to. Each suggestion felt less like an imposition and more like an invitation to a deeper surrender.
But it was the final demonstration that changed everything.
"Marcus," she whispered, leaning close enough that only he could hear, "when I bring you out of trance, you'll remember everything. And you'll come find me after the show. Room 7, backstage. You'll want to learn more. You'll need to."
She stepped back and snapped her fingers three times. "Wide awake!"
Marcus blinked, suddenly aware of the applause, the lights, the reality of standing on stage. Dr. Veil was taking her bow, and he stumbled back to his seat, his heart racing.
He should have left. Gone home. Instead, twenty minutes later, he found himself knocking on the door marked with a brass 7.
"Come in, Marcus."
The dressing room was smaller than he expected, lit by amber lamps that cast everything in warm shadows. Dr. Veil had removed her coat, revealing a black silk blouse. She poured two glasses of wine without asking if he wanted one.
"You came," she said. "Why?"
"I don't know. I just... needed to."
"Because I told you to." She handed him a glass. "The compulsion is still there, isn't it? That golden thread."
He nodded, unable to deny it.
"Hypnosis doesn't work on everyone, Marcus. But you—you're remarkably susceptible. Suggestible. Your mind is like a door left slightly ajar, just waiting for someone to push it open." She took a sip of wine. "How does that make you feel?"
"I should be worried," he admitted. "But mostly I'm... curious."
"Curious about what I could make you do? What I could make you want?" Her smile was knowing. "I could teach you, you know. How to recognize suggestion. How to resist it. How to use it."
"Why would you teach me that?"
"Because power is more interesting when it's shared." She set down her glass and moved closer. "I could show you how to entrance someone with just your voice. How to plant ideas that bloom in the subconscious. How to make someone crave your attention, your approval, your touch."
The air between them felt charged. Marcus found his breathing had deepened.
"But first," Dr. Veil continued, "you need to understand how it feels to be completely under someone's control. To trust them with your deepest self. To let go of every inhibition and defense." She picked up the pocket watch again. "Would you like that, Marcus? To go deeper than you did on stage?"
He should say no. He should leave. Instead, he whispered, "Yes."
"Then sit down and focus on the watch."
This time, the induction was slower, more intimate. She guided him down through layers of relaxation until his conscious mind felt like a distant observer. In this state, her suggestions took on a physical quality—when she described warmth, he felt heat spreading across his skin. When she mentioned desire, his body responded with undeniable need.
"In this deep state," her voice wrapped around him, "you're open to new experiences. New pleasures. When I touch your hand—" her fingers brushed his, "—you'll feel that touch everywhere. Amplified. Intoxicating."
The sensation was overwhelming. A simple touch on his hand sent waves of pleasure radiating through his entire body. He gasped.
"Good," she praised, and the approval made him want to please her more. "Now, I'm going to teach you something. I'm going to show you how to enter someone's mind the way I've entered yours. But you'll only be able to use this knowledge with someone who consents, who wants to experience what you're experiencing now. Do you understand?"
"Yes."
She spent the next hour teaching him in that trance state—planting knowledge directly into his subconscious about tonality, rhythm, metaphor, the architecture of suggestion. Information he'd somehow absorb and be able to access later.
Finally, she brought him up slowly, carefully.
Marcus opened his eyes feeling transformed. The room looked the same, but he saw it differently now. He could see the way Dr. Veil held herself, the subtle power dynamics in how she arranged the space, the deliberate choices in her diction.
"How do you feel?" she asked.
"Like I've learned a language I didn't know existed."
"You have." She finished her wine. "This is just the beginning, Marcus. If you want to continue your education, come back tomorrow night. After the show. But understand—this is a path that will change you. You'll never experience intimacy, persuasion, or desire the same way again."
He stood on shaking legs, still processing everything. "I'll be here."
"I know you will." Her smile was enigmatic. "I've made sure of it."
As he left the theater and walked into the cool night air, Marcus couldn't tell where Dr. Veil's suggestions ended and his own desires began. Perhaps that was exactly the point.
The city lights seemed brighter somehow, and as he passed people on the street, he found himself noticing their patterns—the rhythm of their walking, the tone of their conversations, the subtle ways they influenced each other without realizing it.
He was already counting the hours until tomorrow's show.
The real question was no longer whether he was under her control. It was whether he wanted to be free of it at all.